Editing services.

Every book has different demands, but every author faces the same challenge: creating a meaningful experience for the reader.

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Manuscript reviews

(because even the best writers need an honest mirror)

Think of this as your manuscript's diagnostic check—a high-level exploration that maps your manuscript's current landscape. I'll examine your work from a bird's-eye view, identifying the key elements that drive the reader experience and spotting opportunities for growth. This comprehensive assessment pinpoints where your manuscript stands and charts the course ahead.

You'll receive a detailed editorial letter highlighting your manuscript's strengths and opportunities, and a follow-up 45-minute phone or video conversation.

When we're done, you'll have:

  • A clear snapshot of your manuscript's current strengths and challenges

  • A review of big-picture elements: structure, organization, reader engagement, pacing, character development, and overall impact

  • Suggestions on what to revise, and guidance on the next steps

  • Feedback that goes beyond workshop critiques

This is where insight meets opportunity. Where your manuscript's true potential comes into focus.

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Developmental edit

(for big-picture alignment + deep emotional resonance)

Think of this as your manuscript's transformation—a comprehensive, page-by-page journey through your work. I'll roll up my sleeves and work directly within your pages, providing specific feedback on everything from structure and organization to reader engagement and emotional impact. This intensive edit delivers concrete examples and actionable suggestions throughout your manuscript.

You'll receive in-line comments throughout your manuscript plus an editorial letter that guides you through specific changes and opportunities, identifying not just what to change, but how to change it.

When we're done, you'll have:

  • Detailed, page-specific comments throughout your manuscript

  • Concrete examples of how to strengthen each element of your book

  • Chapter-by-chapter guidance for deepening impact and engagement

  • Specific techniques for elevating your unique voice and vision

Bonus: A second review of 10 pages of your choosing to evaluate the effectiveness of your revisions.

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Line editing

(refining voice, rhythm, and flow for maximum impact)

Think of this as your manuscript's stylistic elevation. Through a meticulous line-by-line enhancement, I'll amplify your manuscript's rhythm and resonance while preserving your unique voice. From lyrical flow to powerful word choice, emotional cadence to clarity and impact—every sentence gets the attention it deserves. This isn't about rules; it's about making your writing as effective and engaging as possible.

You'll receive a manuscript where every line has been refined for maximum impact, with thoughtful suggestions and creative solutions that respect your vision. Each refinement is made with purpose, ensuring your book captivates readers without losing its authenticity.

When we're done, you'll have:

  • In-line suggestions for more powerful word choices and phrasing

  • Clear alternatives for smoother transitions and paragraph flow

  • Specific options to strengthen weak or awkward sentences

  • Detailed notes on enhancing clarity, imagery, and reader engagement

This is where language meets artistry. Where words take flight.

How much will it cost to work together?

I believe in transparency. Detailed pricing for developmental editing and line editing is provided after I review your manuscript and understand your project’s specific needs.

Payment Policy
Projects under $1,000 are paid in full upfront. Projects of $1,000 or more are split into two payments: 50% to begin and 50% due upon delivery.

Professional rates:

For developmental editing and line editing, I follow the standard industry rates established by the Editorial Freelancers Association (EFA).

Manuscript reviews are offered at a flat rate of $950, covering manuscripts up to 75,000* words. This comprehensive service includes a full read of your manuscript, a detailed editorial letter (8-10 pages of thoughtful, honest feedback), and 45-minute strategy session to clarify your best path forward.

*Manuscripts over 75,000 words are billed at an additional $25 per 1,000 words.